出国留学申请书范文（通用29篇）
Dear sir / madam:
Hello, my name is _ _, _ _ _ University teacher. I am also very pleased torecommend to you my students _ _ _, and believe that it can be a good completionof your master's courses in your school.
Ever since he entered the University, he has often shown maturity andstability. Since most of the students in the class are from other provinces andcities, the experience of leaving home for the first time makes it necessary forthem to take a long time to adapt to the new environment. But I have noticedthat, by contrast, _ _ _ _ adjusted quickly and actively involved in the newenvironment.
There is a big difference between the curriculum of the University and themiddle school, and the emphasis is on the ability of self-study. Therefore, infreshman, sophomore, a lot of students have shown varying degrees of adaptation,do not know how to learn the University curriculum. However, _ _ students have astrong ability to adapt, quickly find out the key business management courses,in a very short time to master the learning methods, and other teachers said heis very strong ability to accept new knowledge, new knowledge that he'll be ableto digest, can be understood.
It can be said that some of the students in the class is holding a verygood college entrance examination scores into our school, and _ _ _ by virtue ofhis strong self-learning ability and good learning methods. This, in eachsemester final exam has been well reflected, especially excellent achievementsin professional English in the final exam, the class is a smooth through the 46English exam students. His passion and determination to learn English is to moveme most.
In addition to the study of students in the school _ _ football players,actively participate in the activities of the school organization, strongorganization and leadership. He often comes to my office or give me a call, hemet together to discuss the problems in study and life, hope to get bettergrades in the. _ _ said the students is a good student.
I hope your school can give him a chance, let him in your school rigorousstudy style and good learning environment to continue to develop his expertise,further improve professional knowledge, broaden their horizons. Look at yourschool to consider its application.
尊敬的_领导：
您好!我是辽宁省铁岭市高级中学20_届理科实验班的金宏，和其他的同胞或者说是竞争者们一样，我也希望通过贵校的自主招生来实现我一直以来的梦想——考入_大学，首先感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间审阅我的申请材料。
相信在此之前，您已经阅读过了无数的留学申请书，对省、市三好学生，校学生会主席，团支部书记等也已经见怪不怪了。很可惜，这些耀眼的荣誉和职位我都没有，我有的是对_全面的了解，有的是对_始终如一的热爱与向往，有的是“非_不去”的勇气与决心。更重要的是，我有着诚实、实事求是的品质，我不会为了得到您的青睐而夸大事实，虚张声势，而且我觉得一个人的领导能力、组织能力、交际能力和协调能力并不是只有靠这些职位才能体现出来的，毕竟校学生会主席只有一个，但具有多方面能力的高中生远不止这些。
从小就热爱旅游、喜欢开拓视野的我也算是游遍了祖国的大江南北，各大学也基本都参观过，而且还在去年先后参加了_大学的冬令营和同济、_大学的夏令营，但在众多高校中，唯有自由、开放、享有“_”美誉的_大学深深吸引了我，而且我也听到__的学长_介绍说，__非常适合那些“有想法”的人，只要你有想法，__都会尽全力帮你实现，我觉得我就是那种有想法、有创新意识的人，这也使我更加坚定了“将来一定要到__读书”的决心。凭借着十几年如一日的努力，我的成绩一直名列前茅，中考更是以全市第二十八的成绩考入铁岭市重点高中理科实验班。到了高中，我并没有骄傲，而是更加努力的学习，成绩也有了进一步的飞跃，每次考试成绩均稳定在年级前十名，发挥好时还会进入前五名，我坚信自己是有资格进入_大学的。
做事果断，善于规划是我的另一优点。说到规划，我对自己的未来也已经做好了初步的打算：近年来，随着中国经济的腾飞，汽车已经走入了寻常百姓家。由于汽车工业的进步，这方面人才的需求量也在随之增长。这对从小酷爱汽车，7岁就能识别数十种车标的我，无疑是一种巨大的激励，我也励志将来要进入一家汽车公司，参与设计制造一部性能优异，而且安全节能的汽车。据我所知，现今中国汽车在发动机的节油耐用，稳定性能上仍有一定的提高空间，而伴随着油价的上涨，增压直喷等技术也已走下神坛，进入乘用领域。在车身结构方面，人们对于安全舒适的追求是无止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能设计，有了更优秀的悬架，有了铝材，甚至碳纤维的应用。我愿把我全部的精力都投入到这些领域中，让中国的汽车有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞台上。这一切看似虚幻的梦想，一旦进入__，就都很有可能变为现实。众所周知，__的机械工程及自动化、车辆工程等专业都是当前国内最一流的。除此之外，贵校的密歇根学院不仅包含机械类专业，而且如果前两年在校成绩突出，还能出国到密歇根大学继续深造，学习国外先进的理念，这些都非常有助于实现我远大的理想。我保证，如果我能进入_大学，一定会本着“_”的校训努力学习机械方面的专业知识，培养各方面的综合素质，成为像_那样的_大学的骄傲。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：___
__年__月__日
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were…(有删节)
合理地阐述了申请者学习电子工程的动机，学习动机是评审委员非常看中的。同时，读了这段文字，会使读者沉浸在对童年往事的美好回忆里，借此打动评审委员的心。
另外一篇修改过的文章开头用诗一般的语言写道(有删节):
……I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!” As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.
结尾呼应了开头，阐述了作者为什么要去美国读书:
I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: “She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries… Maria took the trainWarsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.”
pplied Program：Organizational Behavior
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
In contrast， foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have theability to make decisions on their own， though the extent to which this is truedepends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. Theseorganizat Applied Program：Organizational Behavior
The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission toyour well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program， but to impress uponyou my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in bothscholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based mydecision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons， butrather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is thatmoney and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives andthat in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from one's innerneeds. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift， and I intend to usethis gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.
I take great pleasure in recommending Wang Yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.
Mr. Wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the SPECIAL CLASS forthe GIFTED YOUTHS, my university's unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented Chinese youngsters. It was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.
He impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchina's scientific and technological talents. At the time, members of the GiftedClass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. Mr. Wang scored the highest grade in that exam. He also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. To my regret at the time, hisEnglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. But I noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his English during his fiveundergraduate years with us. By now, he seems to be at least as proficient inEnglish as most of his former classmates in the Gifted Class.
In my experience with Mr. Wang, I was impressed with not only hisextraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. I am surethat Mr. Wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program that he maycare to enroll in. So I would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. I would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.
Yours sincerely
Fan Pu
Professor and Deputy Head
尊敬的X领导：
您好!我是辽宁省大石桥市第一高级中学高三学生x。我希望通过贵校的自主招生来实现我在X学习的梦想，感谢您在百忙中抽出时间审阅我的自荐信，以下是我的自我介绍。
三年的高中生活就要结束了，X悠久的历史，深厚的文化底蕴，丰富的教学资源，良好的学术氛围，强烈的时代气息，为社会培养出许多杰出人才。我将选择贵校为第一志愿，非常渴望能在明年7月拿到贵校的录取通知书，成为一名光荣的X学生，成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才。
在多年的学习过程中，从小学习成绩一直的我，凭借自己的努力考入理想的高中——大石桥市第一高级中学，经过三年的锤炼，我已经成长为意志坚强、底蕴深厚、成熟内敛、热爱生活、有爱心、有同情心、有上进心、德智体全面发展的优秀学生。
我性格开朗，兴趣广泛，天文地理、国内国际形势都会引起我极大的兴趣与关注。我喜欢参加学校组织的各种活动，喜欢写作、唱歌，做过校园联欢晚会主持人等，这些爱好，让我不但在学习上，而且在多方面取得进步。
我是个乐观向上的年轻人。热爱生活，逆境也不畏惧，对生活充满信心和希望。我坚信，我的努力会让我达到成功的梦想。我喜欢感受快乐，我希望把快乐传递给我身边的每一个人，我为强者欢呼，为弱者流泪，我相信送人玫瑰手留余香。我用自己的真诚，博得良好的同学缘，老师们也都对我非常认可，这多来自我单纯、直率、热情的性格。
我是理科生，养成了行事条理分明的个性，亦是一个做事果断、有主见、有分寸的人。无论在学习上，还是其他方面，我都努力达到事半功倍的的效果。充分发挥自己的潜力。我常常用更少的时间就能学会别人在标准学习时间内才能获取的知识，经常花费别人的一部分时间完成和别人同样的作业任务。在高中历次的期中、期末考试中，我的成绩大多，这些都源自我科学的学习方法和良好的学习习惯。曾获得大石桥市三好学生的荣誉。
X是我梦寐以求的大学殿堂，假如我这次有幸进步X，我将明确努力方向，能在大学汲取更多的知识，不仅是知识，更有献身祖国、为民族复兴贡献一份力量的情操。在学术活跃的X，我将努力参加一些团体、论坛和各种活动，锻炼我的能力，把自己磨砺成一个X学生所具备的独特文化品位、非凡才能和良好综合素质的优秀人才。
“好风凭借力，送我上青云。”期待在不久的将来成为X的学生，而X则是我人生大学阶段最有意义的好风!随信附上个人简历。恳请贵校领导接受我的申请，实现我的理想。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
I'M GOING RUNNING TODAY. I am not concerned about my calorie consumption forthe day， nor am I anxious to get in shape for the winter season. I just want togo running。
I used to dislike running. "If you don't win this game， you're all runningfive miles tomorrow，" the field hockey coach used to warn， during those lastdays of October when the average temperature seemed to be decreasingexponentially. And so， occasionally， my grief-stricken team would run numerousmiserable laps around the fields. At the end of these excursions， our faces andlimbs would be numb， and we would all have developed those notorious flu-likesymptoms; but the running made us better in the long run， I suppose.Nevertheless， I counted down the days until the end of the field hockey season，vowing never to put on a pair of running shoes again. Then I surprised myself bysigning up for outdoor track in the second half of sophomore year. I was foolishto have believed that I could ever escape this insidious and magneticaddiction。
Anyone would have thought that I'd be off the team in a few days， but thelast week of January caught me splashing through puddles of melted ice， andFebruary winds nearly blew me off the track. I looked forward to practices thistime around， to the claps and the persistent cheers of my fellow trackies. I wasfeeling a "runner's high" spurred by the endorphins released by exercise. But toattribute my affinity for running solely to chemistry diminishes the personalimportance that running has for me。
I like running—in the cool shade of the towering oak trees， and in the warmsunlight spilling over the horizon， and in the drops of rain falling gently fromthe clouds. Certain things become clear to me when I'm running—only whilerunning did I realize that "hippopo_____i" is possibly the funniest word in theEnglish language， and only while running did I realize that the travel sectionof The York Times does not necessarily provide an accurate depiction of theentire world. Running lends me precious moments to contemplate my life： whilerunning I find time to dream about changing the world， to think about recentdeath of a classmate， or to wonder about the secret to college admission。
Running is the awareness of hurdles between me and the finish line; runningis the desire to overcome them. Running is putting up with aches and pains，relishing the knowledge that， in the end， I will have built strength andendurance. Running is the instant clarity of vision with which I can see myfuture just one hundred yards in the distance; it is the understanding thatthese crucial steps will determine victory or defeat。
Running is not the most important thing in the world to me， but it is whatfulfills me when time permits. And right now， before the sun goes down， I liketo take advantage of the road that lies ahead。
Monsieur le Président，
Dans le souhait d'une inscription auprès de votre université， j'ai l'honneurde vous exposer ci-dessous mes principales motivations.
J'étudie le fran?ais depuis bient?t quatre ans， et j'obtiendrai malicence(bac+4) en juillet 20_ .
Outre la langue fran?aise， j'ai étudié littérature fran?aise à laquelle jem'intéresse particulièrement.
Après l'obtention de mon dipl?me， j'aimerais poursuivre mes études delittérature fran?aise dans votre université réputée pour son enseignement delittérature.
Or， pour entreprendre les démarches nécessaires， j'ai besoin d’un certificatde pré-inscription délivré par votre université. C'est pourquoi je vous demandequelles conditions je dois remplir pour obtenir ce certificat et quelles sontles attesations que je devrais fournir.
Si c'est possible， pourriez-vous me faire parvenir， à l'adresse ci-dessus， undossier d'inscription ?
Vous remerciant par avance de votre bienveillance， je vous prie d'agréer，Monsieur le Président， l'expression de mon profond respect.
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Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
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尊敬的先生/女士：
你好
我是江苏省南京市x中学20x年高中毕业生，由于未被理想大学录取，我一直在x中学复读。自20x年起，我受同学的影响，产生了出国留学的念头，于是我通过上网了解到去新西兰留学有比较多的优势。
首先，新西兰是一个多元文化的国家，具有世界先进的教学水平;第二，留学费用比其他国家较低、较合理;第三，气候也与我国南方差不多。因此，我向父母提出拟到新西兰留学的愿望，得到了父母的支持。因为我是女孩子，从小就喜欢幼儿教育。且现代中国的家长对小孩的教育要求比较高，我如果能到新西兰学习幼儿教育专业课程，学成回国后一定能在幼儿教育事业上有作为。
所以，我决心到新西兰留学，打算先用半年的时间到语言学院专修英语，过好语言关，再进行幼儿教育专业课程学习。我相信我已经过三年高中课程的学习，又经过一年的复读，在学习能力和知识水平上有了一定的基础。同时我父母都有固定的工作和较丰厚的收入，在留学经费上也会得到父母的全力支持。因此，我一定能较好地完成留学课程。学成回国后，我一定能实现我从事幼儿教育的愿望，并能在幼儿教育事业上实现我的'人生价值。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
尊敬的先生/女士：
你好，我叫X，是X大学的老师。也是X学生的班主任，我非常高兴地向你推荐我的学生X，并且相信它能够出色的完成在贵校硕士课程的学习。
自从他进入大学以来，常常表现出与年纪不相符的成熟和稳重。由于班上的大部分同学都来自其他省市，这第一次的出门离家的经历使得他们需要一个相当长的过程适应这个完全陌生的新环境。但我注意到，相比之下，某某同志很快的调整好了心态，积极主动地融入到这个新环境之中。
大学的'课程与中学有很大不同，偏重在自学能力，而且专业课程的学习要求另一种思维方式。因此，在大一。大二，很多同学都表现出了不同程度的不适应，不知道该如何学习大学的课程。但是，某某同志适应能力很强，很快摸清了工商管理课程的关键，在很短的时间里就掌握了学习方法，而且其他任课老师都表示他对于新知识的接受能力很强，新学的知识他马上就能消化，当堂就能理解掌握。
可以这么说，班里的部分学生是拿着极其出色的高考成绩走进了我们学校，而某某同志凭借的则是他极强的自学能力和良好的学习方法。这一点，在每学期的期末考试上得到了很好地体现，尤其是在专业英语的期末考试中取得极其优秀的成绩，也是班里少数顺利通过英语四六级考试的同学。他对学习英语的热情和毅力是最让我感动的。除了学同学还校里足球队的主力队员，积极的参加校里组织的各项活动，有极强的组织和领导才能。他经常到我办公室或给我打电话，一起讨论他学习和生活中所遇到的问题，希望取得更好的学习成绩。概括的说某某同志是一个好学生。
我希望贵校能给他一个机会，让他在贵校严谨的学风和良好的学习环境中继续发挥他的特长，进一步提高专业知识，拓宽视野。望贵校考虑它的申请。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
i'm yang, a master candidatefrom harbin institute of technology, harbin, p. r. china, supervised by prof.tang. and i ever contacted you for the password of your papers in the last time.i'm supported by a chinese national fund, which will support those phdcandidates in china to go abroad to some world class universities of theirfields. this programme will cover all living cost i need in usa. after i read alot of papers of my research area, i understand that you are working on maxphases and have published quite a lot of high level scientific papers. as such,you are the leading researcher in __ in the world. i find your area fits mewell, so i write to you to see if you can give me a chance to study in yourschool. my cv and published papers have been attached.
my research area is mainly about max phases. i have published 5 papers inthe journals including j. mater. res. and solid state commun. in addition, 2papers were
submitted. and now i'm doing __. i am not applying a full time phdprogramme, and this programme is a short time (12-24 months) co-educationexperiences more like a visit scholar programme. this programme is a new type ofco-educate phd programme supported by china scholarship council. the studyperiod abroad varies from 12 months at least to 24 months at most. i have toaccomplish my doctor degree back to my school (harbin institute of technology),so i'm not supposed to acquire my doctor degree at drexel university.
and this programme runs like this, students meet the applicationrequirements can apply this programme, and my university and research area isamong the main supporting universities and areas. students must acquire anofficial invitation letter from the prospective tutor/university. therefore, alli need is an official invitation letter from you (or your university). the dateof enrollment i'm considering is september/october 20__. in order to make sure ican catch up with the next year's programme, i have to prepare all theapplication stuff (including your official invitation letter) before january,20__. and because it will cost about 1 month to mail your invitation letter fromusa to china, so i really hope you can respond me as soon as possible to makesure i can receive your letter before the winter vacation this year. and if youcan't make this decision or you have a better recommendation whose researchareas fit me well, please inform me. really hope to hear from you as soon aspossible!
yours sincerely,
to whom it may concern:
i am vice-president of the institute of economics at the harbin universityof science and technology (hust), and i am writing to recommend miss. lv, one ofmy favorite students, to be admitted into your university as a candidate foryour undergraduate program.
i have known miss. lv since her sophomore year of college and acted as herthesis advisor mentor. as an academic advisor for her undergraduate study, iknow her more than two years and i am strikingly impressed by his performanceand personality. in my development economics class, she has proven to be atake-charge student who is able to successfully participate in any task. for hisexcellent academic performance, he won the third class scholarship in 20__. as ateam member of school, she won championship of freshmen-3+1-cup basketballmatch. her chase for extracurricular activities is not confined to sports, shealso won many awards in many art exhibitions, for example, their dance song anddance in the youth-hood won the second prize award in 20__ hust art show, andtheir group the excellent team in collecting folk songs by alumni. during theyears, as class monitor, she has strikingly manifested leadership ability byorganizing colorful activities and contacting with the school anduniversity.
i strongly believe her qualities combined with his toughness of characterwill enable him to be outstanding in the future. based on my observation, i deemmiss. lv as one of the most diligent and aggressive members of my students, shehas the openness to new field, people, and customs, which makes her fit wellwith any groups and the life in the coming future, besides, her ownirrepressible curiosity and an extraordinary ability to dealing with differentchallenges and situations. during the study at college, she is enthusiastic forevery major subject. with a assiduous and surefooted attitude and striving forexcellence, she has achieved each specialized course excellently, and inparticular, he has learnt a lot about japanese culture and history. i also takenote of miss. lv’ remarkable performance in academic research, and she graduatedwith honors in the top 10%. about all, she pay great attention to theadvancement of her comprehensive capability and energetically take part insocial practices. he is friendly to classmates and always ready to help others.i am quite satisfied with him.
i have confident that she will continue to acquire more achievement hisstudies. it is for these reasons above that i offer high recommendations letterfor miss. lv with no hesitation. i highly recommend miss. lv for graduateprogram and hope you will accept her admission to your university. i am reallyappreciate you for taking time to read this letter and looking forward tohearing from you at any time.
sincerely yours,
dr. wang zhonghua, professor, vice-president of the institute of economicsharbin university of science and technology
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
I am a person keen on thinking and experiencing. My lively character andvigorous energy have made me very active in extracurricular events in which Ihave sought an all-round personal development. Sociology Studies will provide mewith the kind of constant real life thinking I have always craved, while helpingme to improve my analytical, practical & communication skills. Also myconcern and curiosity about society and its people inspired me to pursue thissubject for my higher education, as I believe Sociology Studies sums up a lot inthe changing nature of society.
My education has schooling my perception of society and people leading meto be acutely aware of social events, inequality, identities, cultures andreligious fundamentalism, especially in a society such as the one I come from -China. I was practicing in the Chinese Hope Project during summer holidays andvolunteered to investigate the issue of low educational attendance rate forfemale students in rural China with my tutor from my high school and that was avery good experience as it not only made me realise how traditional culturalinfluence could remain unchanged in some of those rural areas in China and alsothe way parents and children interacting. I always have wondered why for manyChinese students just like me, hundreds of them fail to choose what they reallywant to student and do as a career. Chinese parents are definitely havingstrange influences on their kids' decision making in terms of education andcareer or in the worst cases; the parents decided what their kids should dosolely. My mother believes that I should go for Finance studies, while I clearlyknow that my interest has never been in the Mathematical formulas and numbers, Ialways find the diversities of societies, people, beliefs, cultures and the waypeople interacting together very fascinating. So, during this summer, mythoughts kept returning on why I worked so unsuccessfully towards studyingfinance and economics as my mother expected? And how can I truly become my ownmaster by progressing a BA that I really like to engage more research and enrichmyself with? How did all the cultural and beliefs affecting the way we actingthe roles in the community? In which way an individual could actually build upand refine his/her identities?
In pursuing a Sociology degree, I seek answers to these questions. Athorough examination of the Sociology behind human behaves could reveal thebeliefs,values and identities; it enables us to exam and understand ourselvesbetter. While knowledge of Sociology will certainly benefit the social servicesproviding, I also maintain a passion for Culture Studies for that same reason.Cultural behaviour study appeals to me because it tells us why we act in acertain way - under a cultural atmosphere. Also for being in the UK for 3 years,the knowledge about the outside world has given me a unique and balancedperspective to examine the reality of Chinese society too. In this historicalepoch in which China is becoming closely integrated into the internationalcommunity and playing an influence role in the world arena, I wish to gaininsights into our society in its socio-culture aspects and to study how Chineseculture can respond to the globalization process.
By combining these thoughts into a good BA in Sociology degree programme, Ican pursue my professional goal of doing education and community service workfor the government and perhaps focusing in promote public welfare. My experiencein the past in social practices has not only equipped me with an intellectualfoundation for my future studies but has also supplied me with my career plans.In my eyes, China's several thousand years of history has given rise to thedeep-entrenched rule by man instead of rule by law and nature. In dealing withsuch issues like economic development, poverty elimination and the promotion oflaw, the framing and application of government policies seem to play a greaterrole. Therefore, it is obvious that to contribute to public welfare and tonational development, it is more realistic and useful to become a well-trainedand well-qualified public administrator. In this lies the motivation of myapplication for an undergraduate programme in sociology at your esteemeddepartment.
WanSheng High School where I was studying is a key provincial high schoolthat attracts best students from every part of the province. In fierce academiccompetitions, I have managed to remain top-ten in my high school academicperformance and was recommended by the school to Highbury College,Portsmouth tostudy my foundation course. I passed the foundation course successfully in 20__and was an outstanding student of my class. I believe that my previous socialpractices activities and academic preparations have built a solid background forme to further my intensive and fruitful research in your BA in Sociologystudies. After gaining knowledge of both Sociology and different cultures at thehighly regarded University of Leicester, I plan to work for social services touse my knowledge of social human behaviour to aid members of the public.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further mystudy in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.
My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of AppliedPhysics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get myB.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I choseBoston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array ofdatabases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe myinterests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solidacademic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduatestudy.
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the GraduateApplication Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, andother relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of thisletter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
尊敬的_的老师：
您好!
我是来自河南省__中学的__，很高兴能向您呈上我的留学申请书，也希望借此机会我可以脱颖而出，为顺利进入_大学奠定坚实的基础。
在首都这座梦想之城，可谓高校林立，但是只有贵校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我们高中都会有人考入贵校，他们被誉为“天子骄子”。当录取金榜贴到校园里，看着他们脸上洋溢的笑容，我的心里也如波涛汹涌，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定决心，有朝一日我也要以自己的实力筑梦于人大校园，成为她的一分子。
可说归说，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奋学习。
在学习上，我对自己要求十分严格，充分发扬不怕吃苦的精神去面对学习中的一切困难和挫折。我知道学习就是一个苦难的过程，唯有坚持不懈，才能实现凤凰涅盘的重生，才能抵达成功的彼岸。因此，在课堂上，我紧紧跟随老师的思路，认真听讲，细心做好笔记，每一个知识点都不会错过。课下，我珍惜时间，努力复习，积极预习，有的放矢地掌控好自己的学习节奏。我喜欢思考问题，喜欢探究问题的本源，然后举一反三，化整为零。由于我的勤奋、刻苦，我获得了优异的成绩，每次考试都在全校前列，受到了老师和同学们的肯定，多次被评为优秀班干部、优秀学生、学习标兵等。
在获得优异成绩的同时，我还抽时间，挤时间发展自己多方面的兴趣。我喜欢打乒乓球、羽毛球、篮球，沉浸于体育锻炼的激情与豪迈中，在紧张与刺激间收获了强健的体魄。但比起体育锻炼，我更钟情于国学文化。
我喜欢国学的博大精深，喜欢国学的厚重神奇。课余，我已经阅读了多部国学经典，比如《孟子》《论语》《史记》《资治通鉴》《汉书》等，在文字与故事里感受到了国学的无限魅力。在我看来，国学不仅仅是传统文化，更是中华民族核心的价值理念和追求，是数千年来中国人思维方式行为方式生活方式生产方式的高度总结，是中华母亲的乳汁，是中华儿女的血脉、精神和灵魂，是中国人信仰的天空和大地。
出于对国学的热爱，我从小就立志要投身于祖国宝贵文化的学习、挖掘、弘扬中，用自己的所学，为国家的文化发展和民族的文化复兴，贡献自己的微薄之力。
而我之所以在众多的_高校中钟情于贵校，就是因为贵校深厚的文化底蕴吸引了我。贵校是一所以人文社会科学为主的综合性研究型高校。自建校以来，贵校始终不忘“立学为民、治学报国”的办学宗旨，以“实事求是”为校训，逐渐形成了完备的教育体系，尤其注重发挥人文社会科学认识世界、传承文明、创新理论、咨政育人、服务社会的作用，半个多世纪以来，已为国家输送了一大批高素质的人才，其中范文澜、冯其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可谓赫赫有名，为国家的文化建设做出了巨大的贡献。
我敬仰贵校国学院，它是新中国第一家以国学为教育研究目的且本硕连读的教育科研机构。学院学术力量雄厚，已经制定了完整系统的国学教学方案，建立了以经典研读为中心的课程体系，并充分兼顾传统与现代的有机融合，在教学与研究中，既有继承传统的治学特点，又有鲜明的时代性和宽广的国际视野。这些，都令我向往。所以，我认为贵校国学院是我的梦想之地，会改变我的人生轨迹。
尊敬的老师，请您考虑并接受我的申请，给我一片天空，让我自由飞翔，给我一片海洋，让我尽情畅游，我相信，进入人大是我最明智的选择。如果顺利被录取，我一定会珍惜时间，勤奋努力，孜孜以求，投身于学术研究，跟随大师足迹，在国学的传承里留下自己的名字，成为国家的栋梁，成为人大的骄傲。
我相信，我可以。
此致
敬礼
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the application process. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing number of applicants each year， the need to stand out from the competition is also increasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a college recommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious， but it is important that you know the candidate well. After all， how can you write a college recommendation letter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written for candidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harm than good.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letter is to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA， activities， awards， leadership roles， community service， employment experience and special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate， the more constructive your recommendation can be.
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
wang is an impressive student because he has been forced to overcome thesignificant challenge of a serious illness during his freshman year. when ifirst met wang in my discrete math class, he did not appear to be anythingspecial to me. while his exam scores were good, they were not as high as i wouldnow expect of him. what i didn't know then was that due to his illness. wang wasattempting to take all of the difficult early mathematics courses at one time,including discrete mathematics, advanced mathematics, linear algebra, andpossibilities. while most
students found preparing for just one set of these exams difficult, wangwas overwhelmed by four of them. but in the end, he achieved an impressive scoreon the final exam, which made me conscious of his unusual determination hedemonstrates when confronting difficult challenges.
mr. wangi have often talked about a variety of mathematicscomputer scienceconceptsproblems. during these discussions, i always found him to bedelightfully intelligent. not only does he quickly understand the
conceptsproblems presented to him, he is able to analyze theseproblemspresent solutions. but perhaps most important is that wang's thinking isintensely rigorous. when looking at any question, he carefully scrutinizes itifhe finds any uncertain issues, he clears them up immediately. i believe thiskind of thought is essential to become an excellent computer programmer.
Applied Program：Organizational Behavior
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
In contrast， foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have theability to make decisions on their own， though the extent to which this is truedepends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. Theseorganizat
Applied Program：Organizational Behavior
The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission toyour well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program， but to impress uponyou my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in bothscholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based mydecision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons， butrather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is thatmoney and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives andthat in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from one's innerneeds. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift， and I intend to usethis gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
Yours sincerely,
本人__x，男，1986年生于______,从小就受到良好的家庭教育，而且在父母的言传身教下我很早就树立了自己正确的人生观和价值观，并懂得了如何在生活中磨炼自己。
____年x月我被________x录取，并选择了适合自己学习的`国际经济与贸易专业。
一直以来我学习刻苦，勤于钻研，在四年内，学院给了我得智体美全面的教育，科学的安排了;国际贸易、国际工商管理、财务会计、国际结算、市场营销等课程。
四年期间修完全部课程并顺利地通过了计算机国家二级、英语四级等等级考试。适应社会和公司对人才的要求。
为了锻炼自己、服务大家，在大学期间我积极地加入了学院大队学生会，并担任班长一职。在担任班长期间，由于我的积极工作、努力学习，为队里做出了一定的贡献，取得了一定的成绩，曾分别在五四评优和学期评优中被评为“优秀学员”。此外我独立完成了学院科研项目《______》，并获得专家教授的一致好评。
大一、大二暑假期间为了培养自己的能力，了解社会。曾在《__x》杂志社从事撰稿工作，得到了编辑部的一致好评。
后在世纪文学，幻剑书盟等站驻站写文，其中《____》一文获得了近3万次的点击量。
身为军校地方生的我性格开朗，勤奋好学，乐观、自信、责任心强;接受能力强，有强烈的集体荣誉感和上进心。乐于与人相处，与身边的人相处融洽，具有团体合作精神;为人正直，工作认真负责，能吃苦耐劳，做事严谨;缺点是性格比较浮躁。
亲爱的教授：
我很高兴以书面形式推荐的医生的信。 __支持他申请在实验室的博士后位置。
博士。X__一个优秀的研究生致力于为毫秒我的监督下度。在我与他在大学接触，他的创造力和态度研究工作给了我很深的印象。他总是提出他的研究新的思路和可以解决他自己的问题，我很满意他。
__一直致力于高分子发光研究六年左右。据我所知，他的大部分研究都集中在生物分析化学在主人的工作，如蛋白质和核酸检测等，在这些领域，博士。X__有雄厚的背景和科研能力。他已经和将发表多篇论文在国际期刊。我在读他的论文发表和与他讨论往往兴趣。我很赞赏他的研究能力。
__博士还拥有非常优良品格。他是一个虔诚的科研工作者。他的作品是在周末。他是一个诚实和智能，可靠，负责人，并且是非常合作过。
基于这些优势，我相信这个年轻人将实现在今后的工作更大的学业成功。因此，我强烈支持他的应用程序，这将不胜感激，如果你能给他的优先考虑。
请随时联系我，如果我可以回答关于__的任何其他问题。我的地址如下：
教授__X
尊敬的X大学老师：
您好!我是X，现就读于X。感谢您在百忙之中审阅我的留学申请书。
X大学，以怒蹄奔腾的骏马为标志物，希望学子们能“腾天潜渊，吐纳川海;辽阔原野，一任奔驰”，博大高远的追求使我渴慕不已，心神往之。我渴望成为X大学的一名学生。
由于在数学上表现出了优秀的能力，我5岁时上了小学。20X年时，我们全家来到北京，并开始了我在X学校长达8年的学习。这8年来，X见证着我点点滴滴的进步。来到北京前我对英语一无所知，可我的母校是一个国际化的学校，于是我的英语让老师和父母十分着急。后来在父母老师的帮助之下，我一直努力提高自己的英语水平，现在英语已经成为我的优势之一。小升初的时候，我的成绩还不是很好，在我初中三年的不懈努力之下，最终以中考523分(当时的市重点线)的成绩进入了我校高中部实验班。在高一时我的成绩在班里、年级的前列，参加了海淀区数学、物理、化学竞赛，并在第X届全国数学“希望杯”比赛中获得全国三等奖。进入高二之后，我在所有考试(包括月考、期中期末考、高三的周考、区统考)中都保持着班级第一、年级第一的成绩，而且整个高中年级的各科会考成绩都是A。我认为只要对学习有着严肃认真的态度，始终都在努力超越自我，就一定可以取得成功。而且我可以理性对待考试、不断提高自己的学习能力，从而保持了一个稳定的、向上的状态，我会将这种状态在我以后的学习、生活中继续保持下去。
我出生在一个民主开放的家庭。父母都是老师，给我一定的自由发展空间，并着重培养我的领悟能力、学习能力和动手能力，让我学会自立。于是我在遇到生活、学习、与人沟通相处等方面的困难时，都自己想办法独立解决，从而在各方面成为班级、年级的佼佼者。由于父母对我潜移默化的影响，我做事十分认真，习惯追求完美，虽然十分完美是不可能的，但是追求完美的态度和意志让我在学习、工作中有着出色的表现。
正如校训“X”所展示的，我的母校X学校，既秉承了传统教育的严谨、求实，也发扬了寄宿学校的军事化管理，更融入了外国教育的开放和高效。正是在这样的环境中，我拥有了丰富的知识、多样的能力、坚强的毅力和开朗的性格。在X年的学习生涯中，我更加成熟稳重，做事心思缜密、谋划周到，成为一个学习优秀、善于处理各方面事务、全面发展的人。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
Respectful Sir or Madam，
I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really goodnews for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years oldand I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proudof as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So Ialways tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoingand I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. Iwas born in Jixian， a small county with poor land and terrible weather. Myparents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy， I still hopeful enough. Istill love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want tolearn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So Iwant to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help people.But when I went to high school， our life got worst. My parents can’t afford mytuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But Istill keep my faith， because I know that my family will support me to let mydream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchangestudent， I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to studybut I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letterto you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better justbecause I have a dream that I can change my family， my hometown even my country.I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school， I‘ma good student. I’m interested about sports， arts and science. I also like tostudy foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English atschool. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But Ican’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture clearly.That‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. Ineed a scholarship of your school， because I’m a good student. I have a dream.In that dream， I can see my parents are smiling because I became a usefulperson. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My willis strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to youto apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kindheart and reading my letter.
Best wishes.
尊敬的老师：
您好!
我是中国的一名大学本科生，就读上海大学经济系。自20__年起，我关注世界大学的排名及各个学校的优势，产生了出国留学的念头，从小时候就听过剑桥大学。
剑桥大学的工商管理专业是全球非常知名的专业，同时本专业培养具备管理、经济、法律及企业管理方面的知识和能力，能在企、事业单位及政府部门从事管理以及教学、科研方面工作的工商管理学科高级专门人才。
所以我渴望加入到剑桥大学工商管理专业的'研究生行列中。在全球经济一体化进程中，中国将进一步带动国内市场经济的繁荣，拓展中国市场，缺乏现代管理理念指导的中国传统企业将面临严峻的挑战。所以中国的经济发展需要这样的人才。
在大学期间，我勤奋刻苦，认真学习，注重培养自己严谨的科学态度及独立的创新能力，力求学有专精，学以致用，经过大学本科三年多的学习，各科都取得了优异的成绩。因此，我一定能很好地完成留学课程。学成回国后，我一定能实现从事工商管理工作的愿望，并能在这事业上实现我的人生价值。
申请人：
年 月 日
尊敬的_领导：
您好!
我是一个天资聪颖，活泼可爱，知书达礼，善解人意，爱好广泛，才华横溢的有教养的女孩。步入成年的我即将告别我难忘骄傲的母校——辽宁省台安县高级中学(省级示范性高中)，奔赴我心仪已久的_大学。此时此刻，我的心情异常激动。面对梦想学校的领导们，我郑重地向您介绍一下我的个人情况：
我自幼成长在一个书香门第。在这个大家庭中，我受到了良好的教育启蒙，养成了高度的自立自强，奋发向上的生活习惯。从祖辈到父辈，书香之气，一代胜于一代，在台安地区小有名气。父辈哥们成为_网的“董氏三杰”。继承父辈的基因，我也成为了小有名气的文坛高手。有数十篇文章发表于《_》《_》《_》《_》《_》等网络刊物上，常常受到文联作家协会的作家们的好评。
由于家父是辽宁省特级教师，所以，相对而言，我的启蒙大学转学手续教育就比其他同龄人优越得多。从上小学开始，爸爸就对我实施了科学训练。我曾是班级的班长，中队的中队长，少先大队的大队长，环保协会的会长，小记者站站长。虽说身兼数职，但丝毫没有影响我的学业，相反却极大地促进了我的学业。我的各科成绩均名列前茅，而且爱好广泛，体音美全面发展，萨克斯、葫芦丝都曾是我的拿手绝活，电子报刊获省级一等奖。多次获得国家、省、市级书画作品一、二等奖。值得称道的是，在小学毕业生升学考试中，我以全县第一名的好成绩升入县重点中学。在中学期间，历任班级团书记兼班长，主管班级全面工作，成为班主任的得力助手。升入高中后，三年来一直担任班级想去国外上大学的团书记，全面领导学生开展工作，出版报，给同学授课，学生家长会议，和国际交流学生联谊等诸多事宜我都成为其中的主角。用老师和同学的话说：“董婷婷，你真是当年的穆桂英，阵阵少不下呀!”在学生及其家长心目中都占有瞩目的地位，一举一动具有广泛的影响力。可以说是一位不可多得的才女能人。
在我心中，一直有着这样的梦想——那就是有一天能成为爸爸的学生，聆听他的教诲，像他的学生那样，步入理想的高校，走出国门，为台安争光。那些师哥师姐们常常在国外为爸爸发来问候，也常常过问我的情况。这对于我来说，是巨大的鞭策和鼓励。我一定会尽百倍千倍的努力，实现我的理想。_大学就是我目前最近的理想。
一流的心态造就一流的人生，理想的大学铸就祖国的未来。我坚信，选择我是您的明智。我会让_大学以我为荣，我会让祖国母亲露出欣慰的笑脸。因为未来会有一个出色的科学家董婷婷在_诞生。那时，尊敬的各位领导，您就是伯乐，您就是共和国的功臣!你的选择不会错，我的未来不是梦!
有着深厚的文学底蕴的我，会利用我的速读速记的本领，轻松地驾驭键盘，用我超常的智慧谱写我辉煌的青春序曲。科学在发展，人才靠竞争。我愿以我的充足的个人实力挺进我心仪的_大学，让我们地区的更多的拨尖人才涌入_大学，成为_大学的后续力量，把延安精神发扬光大，让_理大大学成为共和国的脊梁支撑。
哪里有追求，哪里就有我;哪里有发展，哪里就有董婷婷!
综上所述，我郑重地向_大学的各位英明决策的领导推荐自己，一个卓越的具有非凡潜能的董婷婷在向您招手。她会让您看到_大学美好的未来，她会让_大学校园焕发青春的风采，更会让_大学展示自强不息，奋发有为的新一代。
鸿志万里投理工，
谋求发展抒豪情。
巾帼莫让须眉志，
振兴中华扬美名。
此致
敬礼!
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year， the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious， but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all， how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA，activities， awards， leadership roles， community service， employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate，the more constructive your recommendation can be.
尊敬的X大学老师领导：
您好!首先感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间审视我的申请材料!
我是X市高级中学理科实验班的X，和其他的同胞或者说是竞争者们一样，我也但愿通过贵校的自主招生来实现我一直以来的梦想考入X大学。
在众多高校中，唯有X大学深深吸引了我，而且我也听到X的学长说，X非常适合那些“有想法主意”的人，只要你有想法主意，X都会尽全力帮你实现，我觉得我就是那种有想法主意、有立异意识的人，这也使我更加坚定了“将来一定要到X读书”的决心。凭借着十几年如一日的努力，我的成绩一直名列前茅，中考更是以全市第二十八的成绩考入铁岭市重点高中理科实验班。到了高中，我并没有骄傲，而是更加努力的学习，成绩也有了进一步的奔腾，每次考试成绩均不乱在年级前十名，施展好时还会进入前五名，我坚信自己是有资格进入X大学的。
相信在此之前，您已经阅读过了无数的自荐信，对省、市三好学生，校学生会主席，团支部书记等也已经见怪不怪了。很可惜，这些刺眼的荣誉和职位我都没有，我有的是对X全面的了解，有的是对X始终如一的热爱与向往，有的是“非X不去”的勇气与决心。更重要的是，我有着老实、量力而行的品质，我不会为了得到您的青睐而强调事实，虚张声势，而且我觉得一个人的领导能力、组织能力、交际能力和协调能力并不是只有靠这些职位才能体现出来的，究竟校学生会主席只有一个，但具有多地方能力的高中生远不止这些。
做事坚决，善于筹划是我的另一长处。说到筹划，我对自己的未来也已经做好了初步的打算：近年来，跟着中国经济的起飞，汽车已经走入了平常庶民家。因为汽车产业的提高，这地方精英的需求量也在随之增长。这对从小酷爱汽车，7岁就能识别数十种车标的我，无疑是一种巨大的激励，我也励志将来要进入一家汽车企业，介入设计制造一部机能优异，而且安全节能的汽车。据我所知，现今中国汽车在发念头的节油耐用，不乱机能上仍有一定的进步空间，而伴跟着油价的提高，增压直喷等技术也已走下神坛，进入乘用领域。在车身结构地方，人们对于安全恬静的追求是无止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能设计，有了更优秀的悬架，有了铝材，甚至碳纤维的应用。我愿把我全部的精力都投入到这些领域中，让中国的汽车有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞台上。这一切看似虚幻的梦想，一旦进入X，就都很有可能变为现实。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
I am writing to express my full support for xiao xiao, who is applying tograduate school at [name of school]. though i am currently a visiting scholar atthe university of california, san diego, i was xiao's supervisor at the vvvuniversity school of architecture and civil engineering. in my [number] years inacademia, xiao stands out as one of the best students i've encountered.
as the professor in charge of vvv's student union, i spent several yearssupervising and working closely with pan, who served as the union's chairpersonand monitor. pan's work included managing the routine affairs of his class of 76students and planning many student activities. consequently, through our closecontact, i gained a thorough understanding of and respect for pan's character,his strong organizational skills, and his leadership ability. for example, infall 1997, xiao organized an evening party for incoming freshmen. i stillvividly remember the party's resounding success, as well as pan's unswervingattention to details.
dedication and passion are hallmarks of pan's character. although the workhe did as a student leader was time-consuming and tiring, he never complained.he simply embraced his responsibilities, and enjoyed the tasks at hand. studentsacknowledged his devotion to his classmates repeatedly: for four years in a row,the student body elected him monitor and chairperson. xiao felt great warmth notonly for his classmates, but also for society at large.
sincerely,
professor name
department of electrical engineering,
abc university
Born in Beijing, China’s political capital, cultural center and economichub, and nurtured in a well-cultured family and an empowering community, I havedeveloped a meaningful outlook on lie. I identify myself with such values thatone gives meaning to life when one lives to give. Success stories of my parents, relatives and friends along their career-path have entrenched my belief inbeing independent and confident as a contributing memeber of the community.
As I look back on early days of my schooling , I am just as grateful to myworking parents for having sent me to one of the best boarding schools inBeijing where I received quality primary education and learned to appreciateindependence. As I recall , being independent was probably the biggest asset Igained as a teenager with the absence of parental guardianship for most of those6 years. After I upgraded to secondary school, I offered to go to school bybike. Though hesitant at first, my parents gave their well-thought-out consentto the 15-km ride average Chinese parents would simply veto in the first placegiven the “one-child policy”and subsequent “little emperors” pampered by parentsand grandparents. Thankfully, that day-to-day routine bike trip,rain orsunshine,tempered my strong character. I have been holding myself to higheststandards, academically and physically from primary school days through tocollege life. I have grown up all these years amongst top cohorts and have beenexposed to varied horizons and dimensions of school life in and outside ofclassroom. I am perfectly healthy and stong with a sharp mind and demonstratedcommitment to teamwork. I was handpicked to play for school baseball team when Iwas in primary school. Back then, my proven leadership and excellent skills inthe field assured my coach that I was born to be a team leader. And I didjustice to his well-timed appointment by heading a team of Beijing to compete inShanghai and Hong Kong several times. And the strong track record of outoutstanding performances each time still fills me with pride and excitementtoday. During one match tour to Hong Kong in the 1990s, I was immediatel exposedto the enviable luxury and prosperity of the city,the dynamic economic center ofAsia. That trip awakened me ,for the first time, to the value of wealth andfinance. And it was that very journey to the thriving metropolis that shaped myambition to be a financer.
Years later,when the colleg entrance exam came,that moment of life anddeath for most of senior high school students in China,my top preference wasFinance Colllege of Beijing Technology and Business Unversity. The result cameas a sad surprise as I was admitted to Computer Science College instead. But Istuck with my dream major and decided to minor in finance. I have since workedhard to equip myself with systematic knowledge of finance. As a result , I amdnow well on my way to graduation with double degrees in both computer scienceand finance in 20__.
During my college days,I led my cohorts in starting up a micro company as Idabbled into the real business world. We settled for newspaper as our maidenattempt.. As a new horn,I took a hands-on approach, from editing to circulating,from cost control to market survey. My strong leadership and sunergy of theentire team kept this mini organization going pretty well in its infancy. Yetinexperience in operation and cost management led to a failed business in theend. But I saw the silver lining in the failed venture. I now know more aboutwhere I need to work on. When I was a little boy, my parents taught me how tomanage money in the safest way. They helped me put my pocket money in the bankand get interest as a return. Now, as a grown-up already,I recognize thatsystematic learning and book knowledge can truely help me know how much moreabout what finance is all about. Naturally, as one’s knowledge about swimmingincreases, the desire to swim in the sea grows. Yet, with more academicexposure, I have come to realize how I am ill-equipped with the knowledge neededto stay afloat in the trubulent sea of finance. That self-conscious humblenessversus the profundiy of finance as a much-respected discipline has led me to optfor further study in the US,home to a number of world-class colleges offinance.
After meticulous comparision and cross-checking, I have settled for ClarkUniversity,the birthplace of the first-ever graduate school in the US. I trustthat demanding academic standards here and ,best of all ,great mastermind offinance that Clark can offer will undoubtedly broaden my horizon and update myvision as financier of the future. To me,Clark is the best and right place thatcan surely make the difference, academically and professionally alike. I am morethan anxious to embrace those best minds in Clark and contribute my humble partto its huge wealth of knowledge and innovative ideas. I am therefore very muchlooking forward to a positive reply from Clark, my dream campus. May that offercome just in time for my journey towards a rewading learning experience in oneof the greatest colleges in the US.