my name is , this year 27 years old. july 1997 me from * * normal school art teacher art professional inside the plan at graduation. from 1997 to within country no longer zifeisheng bag distributive, that i should go up with the sun most glary vocation over. fortunately, tattenai machang small teachers is insufficient, the people in this small introduction, i served as a year of temporary substitute teacher.
recall that time which was both sweet and good, although substitute a low salary, but listen students around the side teacher and teacher growled and looked at the pairs of eyes, the full trust every childishness little face, all the unpleasant life all suddenly vanished. i wanted to, even if it does not become a full member, as long as the school needs, is when the lifetime class teacher i also willingly. and behold, since 1998 countries began to repel temporary and class teacher, received the school verbally notify after, i was reluctant to part with the mood, quietly left school.
today, i want to pass the exam again on the rostrum desire is so urgent! my family has three sisters, two sisters working outside, in order to take care of elderly parents already, i always stay in their side. i have open shop, first business handicraft, again after business clothing. but no matter how business handy, when a glorious peoples teacher has always been my dream of fundamentality and wish to their life work to pursue career. i have participated in the exam, but are due to various reasons and failed to realize the dream, but i decided, as long as the opportunity, i have been exam go on until the ideal realization so far.
now of i, after the test of life than my rival in age i no longer have an advantage, but i had a more than they are in childrens love, patience and responsibility, a more mature and self-confident.
the teachers in this profession is sacred and great, he asked the teacher not only need have a wealth of knowledge, also have a lofty sentiment. therefore, reading normal, i pay great attention to their all-round development, extensive training their hobbies, and learning has the specialty, accomplish except the good at painting and calligraphy outside, still can sing, can speak, speak. learning for pision, high only body sudoku for fan in knowledge-based learning at the same time, i pay attention to cultivating their own noble moral sentiment, consciously bound, observe social ethics, no bad habits and behavior. i think these are an education workers should have the least knowledge.
if, i passed the interview, become numerous teachers team members, i will continue to study hard and work hard, for the hometown of education and contribute their efforts, disappoints engineers of human souls this glorious title.
顾问名称：王鑫
学历背景：英国莱斯特大学金融经济硕士
顾问简介：
从事留学工作三年多，王鑫老师一直致力于做好学生的后期申请工作，“以细节制胜”是她帮助学生斩获无数美国名校offer的重要法宝。王鑫老师更创新性的提出了“1+2+3”的服务理念，即每周至少给学生提供：1份有价值的参考资料+2封电子邮件+ 3次电话沟通。王鑫老师这一理念获得了学生和家长的一致赞许。
经典案例 ：
姓名：mavis
毕业院校及专业：北师大 心理学
硬件条件：托福110(口语25) gre:690+790+ gpa
申请目标及专业：美国 心理学phd
申请难点：专业背景稍弱
录取结果：
university of illinois urbana champaign伊利诺伊大学香槟分校
michigan state university密歇根州立大学
university of maryland--college park马里兰大学帕克分校
mavis是典型的腼腆型的，第一次来公司和我沟通就展现出了这一特点。我接触的学生很多，各种性格的都见过也都接触并且服务过。我觉得性格如同人格，人没有高低贵贱之分，同样的道理，一个性格稍内向的人也不应该遭受到更多的不屑甚至怀疑。因为这都是一个人的特点。
mavis比较踏实、安静，喜欢做学术研究，在本科期间做了几个项目，和老师一起发了三篇论文，还有一个毕业论文。在沟通方面，mavis确实有点内向，但是也不会影响沟通。由于她以后即使希望走上学术研究的道路，结合美国的心理学设置情况，帮她最终确定了临床心理学的方向。
在确定了申请方向之后，下面的事情就明朗了许多。在竞争力提升方面，我给她制定了三步走的计划。首先，我建议她参加一些志愿者的活动，多接触社会，锻炼自己的沟通和表达能力。同时，临床心理学也有一些侧重不同人群的分支，让她多接触一些老人和儿童，对她以后申请相关分支也是由帮助的。从能力上来讲，确实能够让她从接触这些人群中体会到心理学的作用。其次，我在帮她选完学校之后就开始安排她和学校的导师套磁。套磁过程也是非常需要技巧和耐心的，一方面要让导师知道你的背景，另一方面又不能太急，要让导师逐渐对你产生兴趣。我们套磁上下了很多的工夫。最后，在mavis的毕业论文上面我们进行了一些努力。本来她的毕业论文是和她申请的专业没有太多的匹配度，但是我们和她老师进行了协商，变更了论文的题目。在套磁的时候，mavis就需要看一些导师的论文，这样才能更好的和导师沟通，而这些论文对她完成毕业论文也是有帮助的，是可以作为参考文献的。可以说是一个一举两得的做法。这个论文最后还被评为了优秀毕业论文。
无论是选校、文书、套磁、申请材料，各个部分都应该是一个有机的整体，而文书就是一个纽带，将各个部分结合起来，目标就是申请的学校和专业。在我们的配合之下，mavis最终申请到了uiuc,密歇根州立，马里兰帕克等名牌大学的录取。
personal statement:
good morning teachers! my name is . i’m in class eleven, grade three from dalian no. senior high school in liaoning province. it is my great honor to be here for this presentation. to be admitted to the university of hong kong, i have always experienced trials and hardships with no regret for many years.
it is really a good memory for me to visit hong kong when i was still a primary school student, because hong kong has its own excellent geographical location. it has a perfect financial system, information network and mature legal system. the university of hong kong is succeeding in front among the famous universities in the world.
im eager for going to the university of hong kong, and i make a good achievement in grade one and grade two-“get the first and the second”, moreover, i also make a good mark in grade three. i’ve got ten top students in every grade for many times, and i won the first prize in the national innovation in the english competition in 20xx.
i take an active park in the school club activities, the vice minister of astronomy department. i also participated in social practice, and joined the dalian charity federation volunteer branch and actively participate in volunteer activities. “to study for learning” that i have always thought, but most important thing is i love english, that is my interest. it is i was obsessed with the language that i make the firm confidence to go to the university of hong kong. i hope that 4-year professional study in hong kong can make me know more about foreign language deeply, improve my translation level, and after graduation, i want to become a qualified translator and i hope i can do what i can do a drive that the angel of the sino-foreign cultural exchanges, let more foreign friends understand our chinese great nation and long culture. in the foreign friends’ eyes, i hope that xxxa dream of red mansionsxxx is no longer only difficult language symbol, the foreign novel in chinese people’s eyes isn’t also difficult to understand, and this will be my greatest glory in my life!
in the future, i believe that i can definitely become a member of the university of hong kong someday with my hard work and effort, the passion and dream. i believe i can do it.
salute
the national innovation english contest
nankai university
beijing university